Some hair metal
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Some hair metal
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I think I've posted this before, but I threw some vocals on it today (sorry). I think the first half of the first verse needs to be down an octave (I think) but whatever. I don't want to re-record any of the lead guitar, mostly because of the semi_Petrucci run that erupted at the end of the song - from where I don't know.
It's the first song in the player here - called Road Song (Runaway)
I wrote it back in 1993, with Dylan, and it was just called Road Song. When I added the keyboards they reminded me of Runaway by Bon Jovi; with that, and the need to re-write the chorus lyrics, the subtitle was added.
Apologies in advance for the caterwauling ...
I think I've posted this before, but I threw some vocals on it today (sorry). I think the first half of the first verse needs to be down an octave (I think) but whatever. I don't want to re-record any of the lead guitar, mostly because of the semi_Petrucci run that erupted at the end of the song - from where I don't know.
It's the first song in the player here - called Road Song (Runaway)
I wrote it back in 1993, with Dylan, and it was just called Road Song. When I added the keyboards they reminded me of Runaway by Bon Jovi; with that, and the need to re-write the chorus lyrics, the subtitle was added.
Apologies in advance for the caterwauling ...
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Re: Some hair metal
holy hell.. how do you hit (and hold) those highs? they make the song vox wise I reckon
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Re: Some hair metal
Cheers man. Credit for anything good in my singing is down to Dylan's encouragement and pushing (all the crap is down to me)
I can hit some notes, but after 2 or 3 I'm wrecked. For a while I had a vocal warm-up/exercise tape (yes, cassette tape) starting with easy low songs, moving through medium stuff, to Judas Priest, and ending with Skid Row: Wasted Time. I can't do that any more Halfway through the first verse of a moderately high song I start sounding like Axl Rose with a cold.
I can hit some notes, but after 2 or 3 I'm wrecked. For a while I had a vocal warm-up/exercise tape (yes, cassette tape) starting with easy low songs, moving through medium stuff, to Judas Priest, and ending with Skid Row: Wasted Time. I can't do that any more Halfway through the first verse of a moderately high song I start sounding like Axl Rose with a cold.
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Re: Some hair metal
That's really good, I could listen to a lot of that
I dropped into your blog last week and the rest of your youtube clips are pretty bloody good as well, I was listening to a load of it through the afternoon at work (the joys of bashing out word/visio docs) and I only meant to have a quick listen to Layla
nice one
I dropped into your blog last week and the rest of your youtube clips are pretty bloody good as well, I was listening to a load of it through the afternoon at work (the joys of bashing out word/visio docs) and I only meant to have a quick listen to Layla
nice one
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Re: Some hair metal
Oh man, if you recorded some real drums in it it'd really make the track. I love it though, real hair metal
And WOAH, chops!
And WOAH, chops!
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Re: Some hair metal
Thanks guys.
Yeah, it really (really really really) needs some real drums. Our friendly neighbourhood Polar Bear has offered to do some drums for me, but I don't want to overload him, so it might have to wait a while - as I've already sent him three songs
Yeah, it really (really really really) needs some real drums. Our friendly neighbourhood Polar Bear has offered to do some drums for me, but I don't want to overload him, so it might have to wait a while - as I've already sent him three songs
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Re: Some hair metal
Holy shit.
I was listening to it thinknig ... Mmmmmm ... hope this has a solo that rips.
It did.
Oh wow.
I think I have listened to it three times now and it's playing for a fourth time.
I loved the screams ... I got up and played for half a set last night to give a tired vocalist a break ... I think I got one semi scream like that ... and I am feeling it today. And the harmonies were awesome as well! I love me some harmonies ... possibly because I am so crap at them myself. I'm the worst type of BVer ... because I am enthusiastic, but generally crap.
If you were asking what I would change in the song ... a live drummer would be awesome of course, but the only thing would be to try it with a slightly more simple bass line. You have all this neat guitar stuff happening and it seems like the bass is competing for prowess. I don't care because I am a bass player ... and the world needs more bass solos (I don't care if the drums stop) ... but I am completely and utterly impressed.
Bring on the shred.
I was listening to it thinknig ... Mmmmmm ... hope this has a solo that rips.
It did.
Oh wow.
I think I have listened to it three times now and it's playing for a fourth time.
I loved the screams ... I got up and played for half a set last night to give a tired vocalist a break ... I think I got one semi scream like that ... and I am feeling it today. And the harmonies were awesome as well! I love me some harmonies ... possibly because I am so crap at them myself. I'm the worst type of BVer ... because I am enthusiastic, but generally crap.
If you were asking what I would change in the song ... a live drummer would be awesome of course, but the only thing would be to try it with a slightly more simple bass line. You have all this neat guitar stuff happening and it seems like the bass is competing for prowess. I don't care because I am a bass player ... and the world needs more bass solos (I don't care if the drums stop) ... but I am completely and utterly impressed.
Bring on the shred.
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Re: Some hair metal
Very cool, it's great to have a good drummer, and they tend to improve on any automated sounds, but I think the track works as is.
The solo had great tone, good dynamics and it was exciting, passionate vocals too! Thanks for sharing!
The solo had great tone, good dynamics and it was exciting, passionate vocals too! Thanks for sharing!
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Re: Some hair metal
Thanks for listening It is one of my songs I like best
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Re: Some hair metal
That was top stuff mate
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Re: Some hair metal
Nice mate though not my cuppa tea
So, is that low alcohol or no alcohol at all? mmmm, no alcohol, do you want to try it? Noooooooooo.
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Re: Some hair metal
Can't listen to your clip until the 21st of this month, when they take the limter off our broadband, But I will make a point of listening.
Your playing is always top notch world class stuff, but I do wonder why you always do a "nice" smile at the camera. Not a bad thing, but it kinda stands out.
Try something nasty like a Gene Simmons smile maybe?
Your playing is always top notch world class stuff, but I do wonder why you always do a "nice" smile at the camera. Not a bad thing, but it kinda stands out.
Try something nasty like a Gene Simmons smile maybe?