Here the first version of Swagger ft Foal30, Tsuken, ACwild and myself.
Basically for its lost the feel.... or something aint sitting right so Im going to redo it from the start.
But it was fun to create anyway, maybe I left it too long to put it all together, lately Ive been working at a snail pace between work and daddy daycare time...
Swagger
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Re: Swagger
could it be that most of the drumming is a lil straight and not so dynamic? I think the rest falls together okay, but for a longish song, that was what struck out to me.
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Re: Swagger
Well I like it
I think the contrast between your leads and mine is great - and your playing is bloody stunning O_O
Maybe if the drums changed a bit more from around 4:55?
And the rhythm guitars underneath from 5:09 don't sit 100% with the harmony leads, to my ears. Other than that I think it's bloody great
I think the contrast between your leads and mine is great - and your playing is bloody stunning O_O
Maybe if the drums changed a bit more from around 4:55?
And the rhythm guitars underneath from 5:09 don't sit 100% with the harmony leads, to my ears. Other than that I think it's bloody great
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Re: Swagger
I think I like sections of it, already started working on it a bit today, dynamics being the key word, have a cool idea, also I want to shorten it....
we'll see how the next version fares, I have a feeling it will be pretty much a new song lol
I do like this version though...
we'll see how the next version fares, I have a feeling it will be pretty much a new song lol
I do like this version though...