Just when you thought I was joking about the pop punk...

slash-ed · Post by **slash-ed** » Fri Apr 18, 2008 5:55 pm

That's right... I tried my hand at being catchy and commercial... Tell me what you guys think

And I actually finished a song for once!

Crazy Horse · Post by **Crazy Horse** » Fri Apr 18, 2008 6:02 pm

You're better than this Ed.

slash-ed · Post by **slash-ed** » Fri Apr 18, 2008 6:05 pm

Why? I enjoy trying to write in different genres, it's a fun and new learning experience to see how songs work out for different genres.

It doesn't mean I can't still play metal, shred or rock...

TBB Flamey · Post by **TBB Flamey** » Fri Apr 18, 2008 6:15 pm

Sounds like I've heard it a million times before..

CONGRATULATIONS!!!! You nailed it!!

slash-ed · Post by **slash-ed** » Fri Apr 18, 2008 6:33 pm

Awesome. Exactly what I was going for

Now to do this song over 10 times slightly differently, make an album and hit paydirt.

Some Bozo · Post by **Some Bozo** » Fri Apr 18, 2008 6:45 pm

I don't see how it can be finished without the requisite vocal melody made up entirely of the 4th, major third and root...

slash-ed · Post by **slash-ed** » Fri Apr 18, 2008 6:48 pm

I dunno much about vocal harmonies (or otherwise)... but I'm game

Just lemme write some teenage lyrics for it, and I'll be back...

Clarky · Post by **Clarky** » Fri Apr 18, 2008 7:29 pm

I couldn't hear the lyrics for all those distorted guitars... but I think I heard a chorus...

"Oh Janie, she won't reply to my email any more
She blocked me from Bebo, for calling her a whore
So through the tears I wrote this little sonnet
Worshipping her in those pants so tight
That I can see her VW bonnet."

Rog · Post by **Rog** » Fri Apr 18, 2008 8:25 pm

That I can see her VW bonnet

aka camel toe??

denden · Post by **denden** » Fri Apr 18, 2008 8:48 pm

Well, atleast it aint in drop D...

Pop punk?

Oh! ill send you cookies if you can write stereo-typical pop punk in 15/8

Clarky · Post by **Clarky** » Fri Apr 18, 2008 10:24 pm

Rog wrote:
That I can see her VW bonnet
aka camel toe??

Rog, you need a doctor, cause you're pretty f*cking sick.

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