Oh no - BG wrote a song, next step world domination!

Post by Bg » Fri Jul 06, 2007 4:37 pm

Yeah ok, its got cheesey blues lyrics and I stuck with 12 bar - but its possibly the first song wot I wrote

opinions and comments required please

dc · Post by dc » Fri Jul 06, 2007 5:01 pm

Awesome

Post by Bg » Fri Jul 06, 2007 5:08 pm

dc wrote:Awesome

thats an approval then?

Kerry sounded good on the drums I thought....

Tulip · Post by **Tulip** » Fri Jul 06, 2007 8:20 pm

dc wrote:Awesome

+1

Tsuken · Post by **Tsuken** » Fri Jul 06, 2007 9:00 pm

Very cool, man. I liked that. Lovely tone in the solo too.

The one thing I would have done slightly differently was have a small lead break in-between the 2nd and 3rd verses, just to break it up a little. Real good though - did I mention I really liked it?

Jenesis · Post by **Jenesis** » Fri Jul 06, 2007 11:43 pm

Good stuff!

dc · Post by dc » Sat Jul 07, 2007 2:59 am

bluesgeek wrote:
dc wrote:Awesome
thats an approval then? Kerry sounded good on the drums I thought....

Mate, yeah, that's an approval. Our covers are fantastic but I reckon our originals will be something else.

Look out world, here we come.

Post by Bg » Sat Jul 07, 2007 3:36 am

Tsuken wrote:Very cool, man. I liked that. Lovely tone in the solo too.

The one thing I would have done slightly differently was have a small lead break in-between the 2nd and 3rd verses, just to break it up a little. Real good though - did I mention I really liked it?

Cheers mate, will probably put a break in there, I always want to start soloing after 2 verses anyway - 3 is just too long to wait

Tsuken · Post by **Tsuken** » Sat Jul 07, 2007 3:48 am

far too long

Clarky · Post by **Clarky** » Sat Jul 07, 2007 9:30 am

Very good!

Basket Case · Post by **Basket Case** » Sun Jul 15, 2007 9:16 am

Finally got around to listening to this. Tis very cool. I think in the last verse you should have some little guitar fills happening in the gaps between each vocal line (think BB King).

TRYED&FAILED · Post by **TRYED&FAILED** » Sun Jul 15, 2007 10:17 am

Everything in it sounds great

Who's singing ?

Sounds a tiny bit like Black Magic Woman

DarcyPerry · Post by **DarcyPerry** » Sun Jul 15, 2007 10:53 am

I think I commented on this (but it got wiped)? I like the early Fleetwood Mac thing you do. Peter Green inflected guitar tone and vocals. A bit of Mowtown Bass, kinda Thrill Is Gone (BB King) too. I've used that bass line more than once! Once you kick in the overdrive, your Peter Green tone sounds like Gary Moore or Santana. Not a bad thing either. Sounds good to my ears all 'round. Write more!

Especially like the funk backing guitar chops. Not sure if they fit. They sound cool. Long live James Brown.

higainer · Post by **higainer** » Sun Jul 15, 2007 11:04 am

Hats off !!!

bobiron · Post by **bobiron** » Sun Jul 15, 2007 3:40 pm

Very nice BG like the vocal delivery, reminds of Gary Moore and EC for some reason. Love your guitar playing, very nice and very soulful. That little scrap in the outro left me wanting more in the end, especially with the quick fade. The drums and rhythm sounded disconnected at times, but zi am being very picky. Nice demo all the same, you can be proud, please write more.